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January 10, 2007
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Spalshes of color, curves and cum fill the screen.
A beautiful image so provocatively obscene.
How I wish to hear her pant, and groan and moan and scream.
A voluptuous fantasy, served covered in cream.

So I gaze and I yank and I spit forth a stream.
Dedicating this motion, to the notion of a dream.

A gleam, a gleam, trickles far down her thighs.
A fantastic image, provoking my eyes.
The silence is shattered by my ecstatic sighs.
Her reality, so perfect it can only be but a lie.

Passion and lust so caged, demand to be freed.
So yearning and churning, I send forth my seed.
Committing again the most devious of deeds.
In the name of satisfaction, forever she pleads.
A much needed erotic poem which deals with a subject quite taboo, please comment. Hopefully the depiction of the act of cumming twice isn't too repetitive for this poem.
:iconbnab:
Although I've no comment on subject matter (and you'd already expect that from me, I'm sure), regardless, it's very well done. More people need to comment...see, I'm comment whoring for you >:D
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:iconbvbg:
Why thank you very much young cousin, I greatly appreciate your review, though IMO, I dislike the closing line. I feel like I could have done better.
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